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That A Promise Doll Face
2P!America x Reader


Hi everyone so this is a new story I'm working on and it may not be that good >A<

Because this is the first time I write a 2P!Ameica lemon so I'm may not be that good and I don't really know what his human is well I call him Al but I don't know is that the real one XD

So hope you like this love you all~

P.S. This was edited by THE--FUZZZZ. And I've always known him as Allen, nicknamed Al.


Where are you?
Don't leave me.
You promised you'd be with me.
Was that a lie?
Was everything a lie?
Everything you said to me, was it all lies?
Please, come back!
I don't want to be alone anymore!

You open your eyes and you find yourself on the floor not too far from your bed. You're in a terrible mood from the dream you just had prior. The dream that was long forgotten until now. The Memories of the past flooded your mind. The memories of you and your formerly called " Best Friend ". He had been the one to make you smile. But, he had also been the one to take that smile with him when he left you suddenly in this Living Hell.

You had gotten off the floor and walked to your alarm clock. It read 5:30am. School didn't start until 8:45am, so you decided to take a shower to "wash" the dream off your mind.

"Allen," you begin to ask to yourself, "where are you?"

After getting out of the shower and into your school uniform, you walk downstairs to see a letter addressed to you on the kitchen table.

Dear (y/n),

I apologize, my dear, but I can no longer live with you anymore. Because of having a 16-year-old living with me, my boyfriend left me. I don't think I'll come back anytime soon, but I'll send money and pay for the house. I still love you, but you must understand my love life is important. Goodbye, (y/n). I love you.

Love Mommy

You close your eyes tightly as you slam your fist down on the table. "Why?" You asked yourself. "Why does everyone just leave?!"

After calming yourself down, you crumbled the letter from your mother and threw it away. You didn't love her. If she left, then she didn't really care. You were thankful for the money, though.

You soon walked over to the fridge. 'Thank God,' you thought to yourself as the fridge was stocked. You smiled a bit while pulling out the box of waffles and making some. When you had finished, you washed the dishes and grabbed your school bag and leaving for school.

You didn't hate school, you just hated the groups it was split into. The royals, and the rebels.

The Royals are the ones with the money, the power, the looks, the hair, etc.( You know what we mean ) and the teachers fell in love with these kids as they got bribed all the time with money. They were all the good students, while The Rebels were bad.

The Rebels ruled their side of the school with force, threatening the teachers for good grades. You were the only one that hadn't joined a certain group, thus leading to bullying. You didn't join one because of a promise. A promise that you realized would never be complete. A promise made with him.

After a while of walking, you bump into the Queen of all the Royals. After saying your apologies, you quickly try to dash out of her (and her "minions") way.

"Oh, look. Isn't it little (y/n). What's a peasant like you doing out in the castle?" Her voice was cocky and arrogant. A smirk crawled onto her face as your face became slightly angry.

You held back the urge to punch her. 'Fighting only makes it worse,' you'd learn it the hard way. You'd stayed by that since then, and that didn't change now.

"Peasant, get out of my way!" She yelled as she pushed you away, causing you to hit the wall and fall.


So here is the first part of it
Hope you like it >A< and if you don't mine talk me what do you think about this
and thanks for reading my story <3

Edited by THE--FUZZZZ. Like my editing? I'd be happy to edit yours. Comment on my page. :3
Ok so this is a 2P!America x Reader lemon and I hope you like it >W<

Part 1 : You're here 

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ElementalPrincess766 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  New member
Is the "royals" and the "rebels" an Everafter High reference? If so then...YAY!
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
How do you know where I get the idea from?? Armin Arlert (Scared) [V2] 
ElementalPrincess766 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014  New member it....*blushes* I'm a bit too old for it but...
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Same over here XD I'm 16+
ElementalPrincess766 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  New member
The story plot is quite interesting and it was smart how they made everyone the sons and daughters of our favorite characters
gab226789 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Student Writer
Dat picture thou
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I know XD so what do you think?
gab226789 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Student Writer
luv it so far dude
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That good to hear how far have you readied?
gab226789 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Student Writer
I'm waiting for the next ch
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