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That A Promise Doll Face
2P!America x Reader


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Hi everyone so this is a new story I'm working on and it may not be that good >A<

Because this is the first time I write a 2P!Ameica lemon so I'm may not be that good and I don't really know what his human is well I call him Al but I don't know is that the real one XD

So hope you like this love you all~

P.S. This was edited by THE--FUZZZZ. And I've always known him as Allen, nicknamed Al.

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Where are you?
Don't leave me.
You promised you'd be with me.
Was that a lie?
Was everything a lie?
Everything you said to me, was it all lies?
No...
No!
Please, come back!
I don't want to be alone anymore!

You open your eyes and you find yourself on the floor not too far from your bed. You're in a terrible mood from the dream you just had prior. The dream that was long forgotten until now. The Memories of the past flooded your mind. The memories of you and your formerly called " Best Friend ". He had been the one to make you smile. But, he had also been the one to take that smile with him when he left you suddenly in this Living Hell.

You had gotten off the floor and walked to your alarm clock. It read 5:30am. School didn't start until 8:45am, so you decided to take a shower to "wash" the dream off your mind.

"Allen," you begin to ask to yourself, "where are you?"

After getting out of the shower and into your school uniform, you walk downstairs to see a letter addressed to you on the kitchen table.

Dear (y/n),

I apologize, my dear, but I can no longer live with you anymore. Because of having a 16-year-old living with me, my boyfriend left me. I don't think I'll come back anytime soon, but I'll send money and pay for the house. I still love you, but you must understand my love life is important. Goodbye, (y/n). I love you.

Love Mommy


You close your eyes tightly as you slam your fist down on the table. "Why?" You asked yourself. "Why does everyone just leave?!"

After calming yourself down, you crumbled the letter from your mother and threw it away. You didn't love her. If she left, then she didn't really care. You were thankful for the money, though.

You soon walked over to the fridge. 'Thank God,' you thought to yourself as the fridge was stocked. You smiled a bit while pulling out the box of waffles and making some. When you had finished, you washed the dishes and grabbed your school bag and leaving for school.

You didn't hate school, you just hated the groups it was split into. The royals, and the rebels.

The Royals are the ones with the money, the power, the looks, the hair, etc.( You know what we mean ) and the teachers fell in love with these kids as they got bribed all the time with money. They were all the good students, while The Rebels were bad.

The Rebels ruled their side of the school with force, threatening the teachers for good grades. You were the only one that hadn't joined a certain group, thus leading to bullying. You didn't join one because of a promise. A promise that you realized would never be complete. A promise made with him.

After a while of walking, you bump into the Queen of all the Royals. After saying your apologies, you quickly try to dash out of her (and her "minions") way.

"Oh, look. Isn't it little (y/n). What's a peasant like you doing out in the castle?" Her voice was cocky and arrogant. A smirk crawled onto her face as your face became slightly angry.

You held back the urge to punch her. 'Fighting only makes it worse,' you'd learn it the hard way. You'd stayed by that since then, and that didn't change now.

"Peasant, get out of my way!" She yelled as she pushed you away, causing you to hit the wall and fall.

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So here is the first part of it
Hope you like it >A< and if you don't mine talk me what do you think about this
and thanks for reading my story <3

Edited by THE--FUZZZZ. Like my editing? I'd be happy to edit yours. Comment on my page. :3
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Ok so this is a 2P!America x Reader lemon and I hope you like it >W<

Part 1 : You're here 

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:iconanonymous-passions:
Anonymous-passions Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
(I caught the Ever After High ref)


"What's a peasant like you doing out in the castle?"

[What I would have said]

"Well, I was just about to head to class, but I think I might be able to cram a piping hot silver platter full of  "F*** you" into my schedule."
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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner May 11, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Nooooo that tooo bad ass~~ >A< you should not be this bad ass yet 
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:iconanonymous-passions:
Anonymous-passions Featured By Owner May 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
That's just how I roll~ *Sunglasses sparkle*
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ElementalPrincess766 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014
Is the "royals" and the "rebels" an Everafter High reference? If so then...YAY!
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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
How do you know where I get the idea from?? Armin Arlert (Scared) [V2] 
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:iconelementalprincess766:
ElementalPrincess766 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014
I...watch it....*blushes* I'm a bit too old for it but...
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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Same over here XD I'm 16+
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:iconelementalprincess766:
ElementalPrincess766 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014
The story plot is quite interesting and it was smart how they made everyone the sons and daughters of our favorite characters
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gab226789 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Student Writer
Dat picture thou
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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I know XD so what do you think?
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:icongab226789:
gab226789 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Student Writer
luv it so far dude
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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That good to hear how far have you readied?
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:icongab226789:
gab226789 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Student Writer
I'm waiting for the next ch
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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
part 9 ouo
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:icongab226789:
gab226789 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Student Writer
:3
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lightening05 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
What a horrible mother!
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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well she have her reason
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Cavebat777 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Sorry but that bitch is going down and that mom is to!!!

i have serous anger issues 
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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Is ok but you can't just hate them when you only hear one side of the story 
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:iconcavebat777:
Cavebat777 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
True 
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:iconpinkett1314:
Pinkett1314 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Did that bitch just push me oh hell no you royal motherfucking asshole I'm gonna kick you ass so hard and so fast that you'll turn into King Kong 
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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
But if you do that then we don't need Al anymore ouo
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:iconpinkett1314:
Pinkett1314 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Then I'll just kick it back into her original face 
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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hmmmm I will love that but then we don't need Al :P
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:iconpinkett1314:
Pinkett1314 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's true ir's a shame I really wanted to do that to her face
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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I know me too XD
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:iconpinkett1314:
Pinkett1314 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Everyone porbably does but sadly we can not
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internetsevilside Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Holy shit! Al's hips dont lie!
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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I know XD
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:iconkurino-sama-alpha:
kurino-sama-alpha Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014
they really don't. damn. *watches him walk. leans forward to keep good view. drools a little. cheeks flush* damn.
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Ask-1p-2p-America Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Admin: Oh no she didn't!! -takes out knife and turns 2p- IM GONNA SKIN YOU BIATCH!!!

America: CALLM DOWN DUDETT!

Al: -cheering-
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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
( *hiding because I'm scared of you* QAQ Waaaaaaaa!! )

Bitch Queen: Try it ! *still havinf Oliver in my boobs*
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Ask-1p-2p-America Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me: -jumps and attacks- HI KEEKEE!!

America:-facepalm- I give up

Al: DOO ITT!!

Gaz(my neko): -comes to you- Are you ok mew?
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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
( ≧^≦ she scary waaaaaasas! *cry* )

Queen: *smile and whip your face*

Oliver: *got out of the fight and end up next to Al and America*
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Ask-1p-2p-America Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist

Gaz: Master means well she just gets angry she turns 2p.

Me: Bitch! -stabs-

America:-sigh- Oh hey there bro

Al: No cupcakes!

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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
( QAQ I want a hug *cry* )

Queen: why you little! *then there a lot of girl show up behind you and hold onto you then I whip your body until I can see whip mark on you*

Oliver: B...But...I make this two cupcake for you *cute face and hold up two cupcake that have you and Alfred name on it that is also have america falg on it*
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Ask-1p-2p-America Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gaz: -hugs- Mew~!!

Me: -coughs blood- Your still a bitch -spits at her-

Damion: Now its not very nice to hurt my sister or be very feisty~! -throws knife from behind-

Alfred: THX BRO!! -takes cupcake-

Allen: -sigh-Fine. -takes-
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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
( *smile and hug back* Yaaaa hug Heart - Free  )

Queen: * whip the knife away before it hit me* Oh please is that all you got??

Oliver: *smile happily and waiting for you two to eat the cupcake*
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Soulkun4eva Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student Photographer
could I just say what I would do?

Me: I shall move out of your way my royal ass *bows*

Royals: excuse me?

please don't judge me for it but that is what I would probably do
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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love you ♥ >≧3≦> *hug*
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Soulkun4eva Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Student Photographer
thank you
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kawaii-otaku-girl Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
I will never be royal! Sorry. That stupid song just came into my head.
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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Is ok ≧ω≦ now I know what this song can use for 
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:iconkawaii-otaku-girl:
kawaii-otaku-girl Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
Welcome! I'm so inspirational! >u<
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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Have you read part 2?? :3
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:iconkawaii-otaku-girl:
kawaii-otaku-girl Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
Yup!
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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
and now I'm about to up load part 3 XD
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:iconkawaii-otaku-girl:
kawaii-otaku-girl Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
Kk! Can't wait!
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:iconblooyyunya:
BlooyYunya Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ok is up hope you like it
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NirvanaRivera Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Royals....all schools have them. ;u; amazing story BTW. 
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